Saturday 7 June 2014

Six Words Friday- Sky

Sky
Like a pirate ship traversing oceans
The sky galleon dips and weaves
through the peaks, troughs and flows
of the gentle wind blown currents.
The sails flutter as the clipper
tirelessly moves across the vast sky,
forever in its search for treasure.

Joining in with Adrienne for Six Words Friday.
Amanda :)

14 comments:

  1. Wow, what an amazing kite! It reminded me of a film, Stardust, where there's a pirate ship that sails through the sky. x

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    1. Oh I do like that film and yes it's a great kite.

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  2. Just stunning! The photo, the kite, the words - everything ...

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    1. It was just a snap and few words strung together- so thank you:)

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  3. Excellent and I love the poem. x

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  4. Wow, I've never seen a kite like that! Just beautiful, as is your writing about the sky.

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    1. It definitely seems to be a Bali thing- lots of people were seeing them- but I've not seem them anywhere else:) Thanks for the nice comment:)

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  5. What an amazing kite!!! That is fantastic. Lovely to read your words as well. xx

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  6. First of all - coolest kite ever! Your words are wonderful!! I love that you've found rhythm and poetry in the six word form - very inspiring!

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  7. Wow, is that a kite? That's amazing! Great photo, and beautiful words too. x

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